Caitlin you spoke VERY clearly. Every word was able to be understood. You had way too many words on your slides - not much point if you're also going say almost exactly what your audience can read for themselves. Next time you make a PowerPoint, perhaps you could find a whole lot of relevant photos and pictures - or you might like to simply make a speech. I think your Create a Headline idea was clever. You probably needed to come up with some criteria to guide us though. Good luck with your own Journalism plans. I think you would be very capable of pursuing that career.
Great PI Caitlin! We thought that was a really cool topic. You had lots of pictures but they looked like they were from Google. Maybe next time you could speak a bit louder. You spoke clearly though. -Hannah and Natalya
I really liked your P.I. and how you challanged us to make the big head line mine was "Big Run For Fun" Aidans was "Cross country how will win" and Chaz's was "The next big thing" you could of made it a bit more intresting but it was great By Caz Aidan and Josh
This is journlist saul reporting on the big story caitlin's PI makes every body banas. I have wacthed and want to comment on the show.Now some of our veiwers said that u talked to fast with your talking so I thing u sould slow down next time but some were crased and were fans of your facts on the journlist facts. And the amazed that you know a real journlist but I'm sprized that you did not just ask us, will reporter harry and jounrlist saul out. OK lets get this published.
Nice P.I. Cool pics and great idea for a competition!!!!! Next time you could work on speaking clearer!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteGreat P.I Cat!
ReplyDeleteWhat you did well: you spoke clear and you had interveiwed someone. Next time speak louder and try to memirise your speach!
Please and thank-you
Alana and Linda!
Good P.I Cat
ReplyDeleteyou could spek louder
Also you only gave us about 6 or 7 mins for the headline
you at lots of info
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Great PI Caitlin I thought that the subject was good and that there was a bit of competition in there.
ReplyDeleteNext time maybe get your photos off Flickr or creative commons rather than google.
I like how you had a comp and it was really good that you had a time and prizes
ReplyDeleteNext time you could learn more off by heart and a bit louder but apart from that it was awesome
From Annaleise Cindy and Bex
Caitlin you spoke VERY clearly. Every word was able to be understood. You had way too many words on your slides - not much point if you're also going say almost exactly what your audience can read for themselves. Next time you make a PowerPoint, perhaps you could find a whole lot of relevant photos and pictures - or you might like to simply make a speech. I think your Create a Headline idea was clever. You probably needed to come up with some criteria to guide us though. Good luck with your own Journalism plans. I think you would be very capable of pursuing that career.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Caitlin!
ReplyDeleteWe thought that was a really cool topic. You had lots of pictures but they looked like they were from Google. Maybe next time you could speak a bit louder. You spoke clearly though.
-Hannah and Natalya
Cool Pi, we thought the topic could of been a bit more exciting you could of spoken clearer but we liked how you interviewed someone.
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I really liked your P.I. and how you challanged us to make the big head line mine was "Big Run For Fun" Aidans was "Cross country how will win" and Chaz's was "The next big thing" you could of made it a bit more intresting but it was great
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Great p.i. Catlian
ReplyDeleteThat interviewing p.i. was cool. The best part was doing the head line.
you nead to work on reading all the words on the p.i.
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ReplyDeleteThis is journlist saul reporting on the big story caitlin's PI makes every body banas. I have wacthed and want to comment on the show.Now some of our veiwers said that u talked to fast with your talking so I thing u sould slow down next time but some were crased and were fans of your facts on the journlist facts. And the amazed that you know a real journlist but I'm sprized that you did not just ask us, will reporter harry and jounrlist saul out. OK lets get this published.
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good work on the headline comp you need to speak slower
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