Monday, May 2, 2011

Free writing

Hi  my name is heather and I am going to tell you a story of my talking pen. lets start with what is her name her name is Lucy and she is a red pen she is my special pen. It all started when she was made at the factory full with ink and life. she then got put into a box and got taken to a pen shop. Three years later she was still in the shop but with lots of friends and presents because it was her pen day. she was turning three years old. then al at once my family and me walked into the shop and I needed a red pen for school.

1 comment:

  1. I liked the sentence about the factory full with ink and life. That was very descriptive. But ... sorry to be a teacher - where are your capital letters? Mum :)

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